By Trust and Gratitude - Part 1
Reading and writing Big Valley stories - a respite when real life gets a little bit too real. How fortunate we are to have this community! This story is a continuation of the episode By Force and...
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Great start Debbie !!!!I'm glad Harry Dixon came back to help. Although the character was a little (ok more than a little) pathetic to me, I never thought he was all bad.By the way, I was watching 77...
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Great start to your story, Debbie! I always wondered how or who got help for Vic and Heath.
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This sounds interesting...a new take on one of my favorite Heath episodes! I , too, always thought it was a typical "TV ending" where Heath is suddenly "healed"...never liked that. I look forward to...
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Great start, Deb. I agree, the episode does need finishing. I know you said this is NOT a Heath episode, but I'm hoping that you make it at least a little bit a Heathsode.
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Lisa, you are toooo kind- but I'd be glad to help, too, Deb!!! So, will Dixon take the horse and run, or will he dare to go to the ranch with this information and face Nick's probable wrath and...
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He's hurt, his shirt needs to come off ... this is not a Heath story?Great start Deb, I can't wait to see how they find help for Heath or I mean that guy this story isn't about.
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Quote:The fire oughta help, but Im afraid that boy needs a doctor, Maam.Yes, I know. Ive got to get him home. She pulled the blanket a little tighter around Heaths shoulders and put her cheek against...
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Yea I am so glad that your finishing this story up for us now we will know what happened to Harry and how Vic got help for Heath
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I think this is a great idea for a story. It didn't make sense that Heath was suddenly well enough to ride home, and Vic couldn't have left him alone again. So having Dixon go for help has intriguing...
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This is definitely one of my favourite episodes and I am so glad to see a continuation of it. The ending to the original episode, as usual, ended too abruptly just so that the 60 minute slot can be...
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You really do have a way to make to episodes turn into a much better episode. Splendid.Cattis
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This story shows that Dixon was a man of integrity to forego a likely chance of escape in order to help a mother and her son! Great start Deb, you've got me hooked...now how will Nick react to Dixon...
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I agree with Cattis Deb,You do have a way of picking out those storylines that need expansion, I always like your take on things and am looking forward to this one.Joy
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Particularly telling was the scene where Harry argued with himself to decide what to do and the analogy of the moth to a flame that he couldn't stay away from mother and son. Well done!
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I love the opening chapter of this story, Debbie! I think it reads beautifully and I could feel Harry's wistfulness as he compared Victoria's devotion to her son with the way his mother rejected him....
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What a great premise Deb. I love the way you're doing this so far. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter.
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Terrific start!! This is an episode crying for a plausible ending. So glad you've decided to give it one.
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Oh, Deb! I'm sorry I'm so late catching up on this... and imagine you (!) writing a story that isn't a Heath story! I'm impressed! So, Mr. Dixon's conscious is getting to him. I kinda wonder if he...
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